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Re: The Daisy
III. The gunslinger had figured, after an hour or so, he had simply imagined the barn. The horse’s attitude wasn’t making much of a difference. He had the sudden feeling ...
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: The Daisy
II. The morning was quieter. The dim lighted rectangle had become a bright mixture of clean scents and breakfast by the time he had came to. The floor was cold ...
Mar 26, 2009 -
Re: The Daisy
This is the beginning, that I have so far, of my novel 'The Daisy'. Read, love it, review it, hate it, tear it apart. I don't care. I need comments. ...
Mar 24, 2009 -
Re: Snowdance
I really, don't know what to make of that-- and that's not a compliment. To me, it's like what light waves do. They diffract. That's what the poem did, it ...
Mar 24, 2009 -
Re: Idea for a story
Politcs is the only thing I can suggest. But then again, even if you added that, it'd still seem cliche.
Mar 24, 2009 -
Re: The Key of Fate...Long Story! Read it to find out!
It was slightly confusing in the beginning, with all the breaks and such. It got confusing at the end with all the names, but I managed. It was interesting, slightly, ...
Mar 24, 2009
